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Thursday, December 30, 2010

Room 4

            a room is not a
            /level/ room when
            the ceiling caves
            because of a weight
            like indecision
            on the roof


2 comments:

  1. Is this poem about Mall of America Field?

    Jill Heuring

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  2. No, it's not about the collapse of the Metrodome roof in Minneapolis. However, the imagery affected how I wrote the poem. The poem is more about how architectural forces must impinge on a room to make it a room.

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