a room is not a
/level/ room when
the ceiling caves
because of a weight
like indecision
on the roof
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Is this poem about Mall of America Field?
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No, it's not about the collapse of the Metrodome roof in Minneapolis. However, the imagery affected how I wrote the poem. The poem is more about how architectural forces must impinge on a room to make it a room.
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